Tuesday 1 February 2011

Script

Coldham's common EXT. evening time -

A male figured character is walking down a spooky path at night time. He has his hands in his pockets, looking slightly sketchy. We see various different flashbacks in different locations. As he is walking along at a steady pace

Flashback1 EXT: The protagonist and his ex-girlfriend on a romantic date, walking down Newmarket road, hand ing hand entering china chef.
Flashback2 INT: The protagonist in his room burning a picture of his ex-girlfriend, smoking, behind this a montage of several different photos of him with his ex.
Flashback3 INT: him looking at a dictionary with a close up of the word apprehension, drink alcohol `.
Flashback5 EXT : back to n1
Flashback8 INT: Back to n2

Then he comes to the end of the of the path, on the opposite side of the road, facing China Chef, hesitating. Then we focus in on his eye and enter his mind.

In his imagination we see him bursting through the door of china chef, going straight to the kitchen, grabbing his ex-girlfriend and strangling her, until she dies and then he leaves. But then we move from his imagination back to reality, he walks casually across the road, whistling, stops at the door just as the closed sign is turned. We focus on his face and see his disappointment and over his shoulder you see his ex-girlfriend walking away, without him noticing her.

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