Thursday 24 March 2011

Feedback on Final Cut

POSITIVES :)

  • The camera shot/zoom on the eye of one of the main characters is a good use of a thriller convention and gives us more of an idea that it's a psychological thriller.
  • Loads of people loved out music because it creates tension and fits in with the editing. The music is also dramatic and emphasises the main character.
  • The fading in and out of the the main character walking and him in his room is good because its in sync with the music.
  • The dark location from the start gives a sense of fear and the lighting was good throughout.
  • The close up of the characters was good.
  • The use of the cigarette prop.
  • The music and the camerawork together works really well.
  • The time of day and the lighting added to the effect of the viewer.
  • Parallel editing is very good.
NEGATIVES :(
  • The camera work could have been more steady and the zoom shot was also unsteady and jerky.
  • The titles could have been clearer and maybe bigger.
  • The ending could have been more clearer and visible.
  • Could have made the strangling more violent and dramatic.
  • A change in font was suggested and to improve the effects on the titles
  • Improve the variation of sound and maybe use some digetic sound, change the tempo of the sound?
  • End it at 1:40 when she drops the cigarette. 

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